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Ten to an Angel, Chickadee
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If
ever
I am a
bird, I hope that
the thundercrack in
your smile fissures bird from
beak. You always say "those wings
aren't fit for a chickadee." and
I'd weep because my over-grown wings
fit. You showed me who the real angel was.
ever
I am a
bird, I hope that
the thundercrack in
your smile fissures bird from
beak. You always say "those wings
aren't fit for a chickadee." and
I'd weep because my over-grown wings
fit. You showed me who the real angel was.
Day two of DFC! 
I'm so behind! 
[Title is bleh.]
This is based off the prompt "archangel" and using the form "Etheree".
Etheree
The first line is a monosyllabic word; the second line has two syllables, and so on, until the tenth line with, ultimately, ten syllables. The most important elements of this format are the etheree structure, coherence (pulling ideas together to create a complete thought) and focusing on imagery.
I'm so behind! [Title is bleh.]This is based off the prompt "archangel" and using the form "Etheree".
Etheree
The first line is a monosyllabic word; the second line has two syllables, and so on, until the tenth line with, ultimately, ten syllables. The most important elements of this format are the etheree structure, coherence (pulling ideas together to create a complete thought) and focusing on imagery.
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The thundercrack in your smile...
I LOVE that line.
I LOVE that line.