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She negates nebulae, calling comets to dive
beneath breathless waves while she begins sectioning stardust
inside her rib's ravines; harpsichord hipbones
plucked for promises with faulty fingertips. Cyclones
rain rage at gaunt galaxies. She postpones
her haunting to tangle my tether, this is the hardest
leaking lungs have labored to allow her to thrive.
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Salted fingertips pluck at his
seaweed hair, trying to mimic the
sound of the ocean at
sunrise. The boy with
sea-scape eyes, black and dark,
scared but cruel
stands inside the ocean's heart at sunset.
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Unending folds of sky are stolen; by his sea-soaked hands
and he wrings its last breath. Her most beloved constellation
begins speaking with the flickering of heartbeats. He stops.
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The last of your kind,
with the solar flare of hope.
I am a black hole.
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She shields herself beneath his froth,
tamed fingers reach forward to grasp at light,
as if the sun had a body she could hold.
He places her cosmic hands
into the watery cluster of his
and asks, 'How do I catch stars?'
'Hold your breath - hurl your wishes
against the sky. Watch them shatter.'
beneath breathless waves while she begins sectioning stardust
inside her rib's ravines; harpsichord hipbones
plucked for promises with faulty fingertips. Cyclones
rain rage at gaunt galaxies. She postpones
her haunting to tangle my tether, this is the hardest
leaking lungs have labored to allow her to thrive.
---
Salted fingertips pluck at his
seaweed hair, trying to mimic the
sound of the ocean at
sunrise. The boy with
sea-scape eyes, black and dark,
scared but cruel
stands inside the ocean's heart at sunset.
---
Unending folds of sky are stolen; by his sea-soaked hands
and he wrings its last breath. Her most beloved constellation
begins speaking with the flickering of heartbeats. He stops.
---
The last of your kind,
with the solar flare of hope.
I am a black hole.
---
She shields herself beneath his froth,
tamed fingers reach forward to grasp at light,
as if the sun had a body she could hold.
He places her cosmic hands
into the watery cluster of his
and asks, 'How do I catch stars?'
'Hold your breath - hurl your wishes
against the sky. Watch them shatter.'
Literature
To the lonely sea and the sky
in the dim of twilight
I feel immortal
but I feel blue;
stardust and sun drenched
torsos
watercolor pain
like the desert misses the rain
I remember you:
a sky of smog
coasting on thin ice,
limbs tangled
around the
sextile sun and uranus
bones
dust
insomnia on the silvermoon
but I am the wayward child
and there's a hole in my soul,
so please show me
show me what the stars look like tonight.
Literature
rock bottom, ocean floor
half-past a different kind of broken
on sadness, she wrote:
blind fool in the umbra
bury yourself in me
on the other side of lonely
and by god, i love you
(maybe i will be a landfill)
everyone i meet looks for a place to stay;
out of the woods, on wet roads
under wind, under rain
-i'm so far away
no wonder it took him 1455 pages
waiting for her to come this way
tramps like us-
in lieu of emptiness
in absence of a poem
wander, wander
(pour a little salt, we were never here)
Literature
We meet at the sea strand
If I was an old building
and if you were a sailboat,
the dialogue of the tides would
sing all the lonesome love
letters you never wrote.
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For #ProjectDFC's December Form Challenge
I haven't written in a very long time. I mean a very long time, but I did promise *kiwi-damnation I would try to participate. Also, since I'm lazy, they're all going in one deviation and I like these enough to put in my gallery[for now], but not in their own deviations. December 4th, 7th, and 17th. I'll add more whenever I can muddle through some of the other forms and not cry because forms are so difficult for me.
I also seem to like the sea and stars lately.
Edit: Added Days 15 and 19.
I support #dALinkSystem!
'having held on forever to the hope of knowing' by =Vigilo
'Dearest, -DFC Day 7' by ~ThomasInTheClouds
'dfc 12-17: haiku' by =deinktvis
I haven't written in a very long time. I mean a very long time, but I did promise *kiwi-damnation I would try to participate. Also, since I'm lazy, they're all going in one deviation and I like these enough to put in my gallery[for now], but not in their own deviations. December 4th, 7th, and 17th. I'll add more whenever I can muddle through some of the other forms and not cry because forms are so difficult for me.
I also seem to like the sea and stars lately.
Edit: Added Days 15 and 19.
December 4th: The Alliterisen
The Alliterisen (Complex and Rhyming), a form created by Udit Bhatia, is a simple seven-lined poem with a specific syllable pattern and two alliterations per line.
My base syllable count was 12 because I take a long time to say anything apparently.
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December 7th : Pleiades
A seven line, 1 stanza poem formed by Craig Tigerman. The first words of each line have to start with the same letter as the title.
I didn't follow the rules on this form because of reasons.
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December 15th: Pyongsijo 'Si Jo'
The melodic Korean form pyongsijo, otherwise known in the west as merely ‘Si Jo’ features 3 lines of 14-16 syllables each with pauses mid-sentence. Each line addresses something different.
1st Line: Opens, presents the situation, problem or theme.
2nd Line: Development of the story, a turn and elaboration.
3rd Line: Concludes the poem. The first half of this line contains a twist or resolution of the theme.
Added on December 18th. So. Difficult.
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December 17th: The Haiku
A haiku is a Japanese style of poetry that has 3 lines with syllabic counts 5, 7,5 and are usually seasonal or about nature. They are also about the human condition and how this is related to or made insignificant by nature.
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December 19th: The Indriso
The Indriso is an Italian form that is similar to the sonnet except its structure features two 3 line stanzas (terzains) and two 1 line stanzas. It is meant to have a melodic flow like a song and combine this with the punchy one line statements.
Added on December 19th.
I support #dALinkSystem!
having held on forever to the hope of knowingyou read arrows, archer, from some secret sage;
before the battle, my teacher took your thumb from the bow,
(sound spying, how your arrow went whistling)
recalling the rush in your five-full fist.
so I, archer became, yet you brave,
never bitter for the bow, fought the forfeit feud.
you have history’s heart: and I won a war.
'having held on forever to the hope of knowing' by =Vigilo
Dearest, -DFC Day 7Demure is the outermost asteroid
Dancing 'round my galactic heart.
Devour my hesitation with the sheer magnitude of your splendor.
Deep in the abyss of affection, I'm losing oxygen.
Deliver those celestial lips and we'll collide. Our
Debris will scatter our story 'cross this universe. (I
Didn't need to breathe anyway.)
'Dearest, -DFC Day 7' by ~ThomasInTheClouds
dfc 12-17: haikuoracle,
foreshadowing snow:
morning frost.
'dfc 12-17: haiku' by =deinktvis
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